dimecres, 4 de juny del 2014

THE MOON.

This week’s prompt at Poetry Jam is the moon. The moon is to me the symbol of loneliness in the good sense of the word, that is to say, it represents a being that, in spite of being alone, doesn’t stop shining. Loneliness isn’t to it – or her, as mentioned in the poem – an obstacle or a reason to fade, but a motivation to keep being as powerful, beautiful and bright as it (she) always has been. Regardless of how many years, centuries, even millennia, she spends alone; she’ll always keep letting her light shine.

Higher and higher she flies
Hung on such sinister skies
And all on her own

Not a single word does she say
She quietly stares at us play
And all on her own

And she owns a mirror on earth
Where she can admire her worth
Because she’s all on her own

So elegantly dressed in white
Everyone suspicious of her dark side
To her surrended even the ocean tides
And that’s why she’s so lonesome

But don’t you dare slide
Never let the black skies around you
Say your beauty you must hide

Don’t you dare fade away
Never stop shaking poets around you
And dwell dreamer’s minds night and day

24 comentaris:

  1. smiles...she def shakes the poets...
    perhaps our words keep her from being too lonely...

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    1. Perhaps... I hope they don't though. She would lose part of her charm if she wasn't up there all alone. Thank you for commenting, Brian!

      Elimina
  2. Yes the moon is and always has been alone circling the Earth. But compared to everything else she is quite close to the earth. Loneliness is a matter of perspective.

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    1. That's a truly interesting approach, Peggy. I hadn't thought of it that way. Loneliness is indeed perceived differently by each individual, and I hadn't seen the Earth as a companion for the moon. Thanks for your comment!

      Elimina
  3. No matter how long it's been around or will be, it doesn't fade. Before us and after us, it will endure and be just as young as it has always looked!

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    1. I hope so! Otherwise a huge source of beauty and artistic insipiration would disappear. Thank you for reading and commenting, Donna!

      Elimina
  4. The last verse really put a what if spin on your poem. I'm still thinking. Great jov.

    Thanks for stopping by to visit.

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    1. Thank you very much, Gail! I'm glad you liked it and it made you think. I do often wonder how would nighttime look on Earth if the moon one day vanished - although I know this can't happen.

      Elimina
  5. I love what you write in your comments about the moon continuing to shine, no matter how long she is alone.......that is a very good message for some of us lonely dreamers.

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    1. Thank you, Sherry! I really appreciate your comment. Indeed, I do think loneliness can destroy you if you're not able to deal with it, but if you are, you can get to enjoy it very much; loneliness doesn't necessarily lead to sadness and it can be enriching. Again, thanks for commenting!

      Elimina
  6. I really like the way you have characterized the moon. She definitely does not say a single word, but I have a feeling she sees and knows all! And, ha, she definitely does shake the poets around her; and I am sure she will continue to do that for centuries to come. Smiles. (And, by the way, welcome to PoetryJam.)

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    1. Thank you very much, Mary! Your comment is quite encouraging. I'm glad you liked the idea!

      Elimina
  7. I like the idea of the moon as the quiet witness of our actions. And she does inspire us.

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    1. That's the way I see her indeed. Thanks for your comment, Gabriella!

      Elimina
  8. yes she will always dwell in the dreamer's mind and shake the poets as well...lovely lines

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    1. Hopefully she will. Thank you for reading and commenting, Sumana!

      Elimina
  9. A beautiful source of inspiration moon is for us all:)

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    1. She certainly is, Vandana! Thanks for stopping by and reading!

      Elimina
  10. Love that emotion of blackness hiding beauty, this really makes you feel detached and longing for love. Very interesting and well penned.

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