This week’s prompt at Poetry Jam is the moon. The moon is to me the symbol
of loneliness in the good sense of the word, that is to say, it represents a being
that, in spite of being alone, doesn’t stop shining. Loneliness isn’t to it –
or her, as mentioned in the poem – an obstacle or a reason to fade, but a
motivation to keep being as powerful, beautiful and bright as it (she) always has
been. Regardless of how many years, centuries, even millennia, she spends
alone; she’ll always keep letting her light shine.
Higher and higher she flies
Hung on such sinister skies
And all on her own
Not a single word does she say
She quietly stares at us play
And all on her own
And she owns a mirror on earth
Where she can admire her worth
Because she’s all on her own
So elegantly dressed in white
Everyone suspicious of her dark
side
To her surrended even the ocean
tides
And that’s why she’s so lonesome
But don’t you dare slide
Never let the black skies around you
Say your beauty you must hide
Don’t you dare fade away
Never stop shaking poets around you
And dwell dreamer’s minds night and
day
smiles...she def shakes the poets...
ResponEliminaperhaps our words keep her from being too lonely...
Perhaps... I hope they don't though. She would lose part of her charm if she wasn't up there all alone. Thank you for commenting, Brian!
EliminaYes the moon is and always has been alone circling the Earth. But compared to everything else she is quite close to the earth. Loneliness is a matter of perspective.
ResponEliminaThat's a truly interesting approach, Peggy. I hadn't thought of it that way. Loneliness is indeed perceived differently by each individual, and I hadn't seen the Earth as a companion for the moon. Thanks for your comment!
EliminaNo matter how long it's been around or will be, it doesn't fade. Before us and after us, it will endure and be just as young as it has always looked!
ResponEliminaI hope so! Otherwise a huge source of beauty and artistic insipiration would disappear. Thank you for reading and commenting, Donna!
EliminaThe last verse really put a what if spin on your poem. I'm still thinking. Great jov.
ResponEliminaThanks for stopping by to visit.
Thank you very much, Gail! I'm glad you liked it and it made you think. I do often wonder how would nighttime look on Earth if the moon one day vanished - although I know this can't happen.
EliminaI love what you write in your comments about the moon continuing to shine, no matter how long she is alone.......that is a very good message for some of us lonely dreamers.
ResponEliminaThank you, Sherry! I really appreciate your comment. Indeed, I do think loneliness can destroy you if you're not able to deal with it, but if you are, you can get to enjoy it very much; loneliness doesn't necessarily lead to sadness and it can be enriching. Again, thanks for commenting!
EliminaI really like the way you have characterized the moon. She definitely does not say a single word, but I have a feeling she sees and knows all! And, ha, she definitely does shake the poets around her; and I am sure she will continue to do that for centuries to come. Smiles. (And, by the way, welcome to PoetryJam.)
ResponEliminaThank you very much, Mary! Your comment is quite encouraging. I'm glad you liked the idea!
EliminaI like the idea of the moon as the quiet witness of our actions. And she does inspire us.
ResponEliminaThat's the way I see her indeed. Thanks for your comment, Gabriella!
Eliminayes she will always dwell in the dreamer's mind and shake the poets as well...lovely lines
ResponEliminaHopefully she will. Thank you for reading and commenting, Sumana!
EliminaA beautiful source of inspiration moon is for us all:)
ResponEliminaShe certainly is, Vandana! Thanks for stopping by and reading!
EliminaLuv your stoic moon
ResponEliminaMuch love...
Thank you, Gillena!
EliminaThis is SO Wonderful!
ResponEliminaThank you very much, starralee!
EliminaLove that emotion of blackness hiding beauty, this really makes you feel detached and longing for love. Very interesting and well penned.
ResponEliminaThanks a lot, alan! I'm glad you liked it.
Elimina