The prompt this week at Poetry
Jam is age, aging, aged… I
wrote about how it feels when time goes by far too quick, when you can’t catch
up with it but you’re expected to fulfill some socially held demands according
to how old you are, no matter how you feel about it - worried, overwhelmed, not
ready yet…
This is the first time I post a poem of mine, so I
hope everyone who reads it enjoys it.
I’ve always seen
myself as a drifter
In search of a
place to hide
From you, my most
feared whisper
That I had to
finally give in to life
You always ran
faster than I could
And unlike you I
went so slow
That I couldn’t
heal my old wound
In the hands of
such merciless foe
But in escaping
I saw no light
For clocks would
never stop
So I found
myself lost in your night
In the twilight
of my childish hope
And you’re so
cruel to me
Pushing me to
blindly fly
Through a
violent breeze
In a
never-ending grey sky
And I should be
able to survive
But there’s not
much hope to hold
When it’s
freezing outside
And I’m wearing
no coat
time does go so quick...pushing us on faster and faster, its a wonder we keep our feet...and we can feel so unprepared in the moment...
ResponEliminaIt does indeed... It's sometimes very hard to assume certain responsibilities inherent to adulthood. Thanks for reading and commenting, Brian!
ResponEliminaI enjoyed reading this whole poem, but those last two lines were especially striking. They had quite a dramatic effect. A nice response to the prompt. So glad you posted this!
ResponEliminaThank you very much for your opinion, Mary Ann! I'm glad you liked it!
EliminaTime is so relentless and I am afraid it never gets any better. Enjoyed reading this and am glad you posted here at Poetry Jam. Come around earlier in the week next time so more people get a chance to visit! Welcome.
ResponEliminaThank you, Peggy!
Elimina